NO.10422579
have a nice time in english
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79 名前：添削：2005/10/24 12:46
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・for encourage→for encouraging（thank you for ～ing）
・i wish you good luck→i wish you ［will have］ good luck（luckは名詞）
・thats a new news to me→thats news to me（it`s news to me＝それは初耳だ）
・you are a aogaku student→you are ［an］ aogaku student
・do you major→do you major ［in］
・britain and american literature→［english］ and american literature
・the same→same（形容詞にtheはつけない）
・in that univ→［to］ that univ（same to～＝～についても同じ）
jeez,I can so find many grammatical mistakes in your sentence.
you should study english much harder, if you want to enter aoyama.